Write with natural flow

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reader is

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going to read it i correct

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dozens and dozens of these

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uh compositions of my students every

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month and some

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just are nice to read they're pleasant

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to read because they flow in a natural

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way and some

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i have to force myself to get through

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them because

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it's stopping and starting and these

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cohesive devices

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are not used effectively or maybe not

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used at all

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um and you can use these cohesive

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devices to link sentences to link ideas

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to present ideas to contrast ideas

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and if you use them effectively it

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really will improve your your

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compositions

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okay those are my tips for today i hope

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they help you start practicing them the

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more you practice the

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the more you will understand

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how to use this grammar and these

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techniques and over time it will just

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become natural to include them in your

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compositions okay thank you for joining

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me and i'll see you very soon for

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another video take care bye

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